Thursday, October 4, 2012

Imagine that you are an investigative reporter for the local paper.  Using the evidence that you gathered in your planner, plan and compose a brief narrative to be published about whether or not Pipin was involved in Audrey’s death.  Your narratives should have a strong topic for your audience and rely heavily on evidence from your reading.  Articles should have a title and be at least two paragraphs in length.  Pictures are a plus!

Pipin was not involved in Audreys' death. Audrey wanted to go 561 fee, 36 less than him that is the deepest a human have ever gone. The terrible weather had a big effect on there dive. Pinin realise she was going down too slow. Pascal was trying him self to get her above the water.

Audrey 538 feet deep and the valve was not inflating. Due to the lack of help Pipin and the other safetly men was there to do. Pipin tried to help her get air but it was already to late. They tried as fast as they can to bring her back so she can get air, but they have failed. Pipin would have not wanted anything dangerous to happen to his wife.

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